One day Josh, Dan and Jess were playing a game and Emma brought
them a cup of water.
them a cup of water.
“Thank you” They all say. Emma keeps bringing them cups of water and Josh,
Dan and Jess keep saying “Thank you”.
Dan and Jess keep saying “Thank you”.
But Emma plays a trick on them, The water is actually from the toilet and Josh,
Dan and Jess don’t know.
Dan and Jess don’t know.
Emma is naughty, what if she gets in big, big trouble and she has to go to
her room and have a day sleep, But Emma does not know if she will get into
trouble.
her room and have a day sleep, But Emma does not know if she will get into
trouble.
When Gerald and Sharon come and they see Emma they say
“what are you doing” they say and Emma says nothing and she gets into trouble.
“what are you doing” they say and Emma says nothing and she gets into trouble.
Gerald and Sharon say “go have a day sleep and what are you doing with
that water? Answer me Gerald said and Emma said “I um,um, um I was tricking
Dan, Josh and Jess” she said. OK then go have a day sleep Emma.
that water? Answer me Gerald said and Emma said “I um,um, um I was tricking
Dan, Josh and Jess” she said. OK then go have a day sleep Emma.
Dan, Jess and Josh were still playing their game and they
wanted some more water. Then Sharon came and told them.
“Emma played a trick on you guys and they said “what trick”
“the water trick don’t you know” and they said “no”.
Were we drinking um, um yukky water and Sharon said
“yes it was toilet water” and they went quiet.
wanted some more water. Then Sharon came and told them.
“Emma played a trick on you guys and they said “what trick”
“the water trick don’t you know” and they said “no”.
Were we drinking um, um yukky water and Sharon said
“yes it was toilet water” and they went quiet.
THE END
Hey Leah, Your story is amazing ! If you want I can fix the writing for you if you want me to ? Enjoy your last day of the holiday. Georgie
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