The hidden cities

  The  Hidden  Cities

On one rainy day it was very boring at lunch time. Their teacher had insisted that they should stay inside and study because it was raining. Then Daisy heard her best friend Anabell whisper “Hey Daisy what are you doing? “ so Daisy replied “I’m daydreaming.” Then the teacher heard them whispering. They got sent to detention.

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 It was very boring in detention. There was nothing else to do except examon herself critically in the mirror; she never really bothered to look In the bathroom mirror at their house.

 Now she noticed how different she was to all the other kids in her class. As she looked closer in the mirror, she noticed many faded freckles. She had brown eyes and silky blond hair. She hadn't had  her hair trimmed since she was five, so it was quite long. When she looked over at Anabell and saw so much difference. Anabell had inky black hair, piercing blue eyes and skin as white as snow. Then Daisy felt something strange on the table but it was strange not like she ever felt before. It was straight then down and crooked then she pushed it together and it rumbled and went down into the floor.

Out of nowhere a ladder popped on the opening then Daisy Tapped Anabell  and said follow me her voice was barely a whisper. She was so excited she looked around. The principal wasn't back yet so she creeped down the ladder with Anabell right behind her. Then she reached the bottom, it was damp and cooled down there.  she rummaged in her pocket to find matches. She found some and she took them out of her pocket. Then she realised the tunnel was Quite old. She saw lamps like the old ones that you would see in movies like Beauty and the Beast. So she lit one of them to light the pathway. 

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She heard Anabell whisper. “ don't you think something feels wrong in this place?” Daisy agred. She did feel something creepy deep down in her stomach. Then she saw a figure looming at the edge of a faint light. “Who are you?” she called out. Then with a sweeping step the figure disappeared into the shadows. She felt a hand on her shoulder and she jumped but realised it was only Anabell. The figure appeared again but this time it was closer. “Who are you?” the figure took a step closer and that step took the figure into the light.

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 The face looked strangely familiar. The figure beckoned for Daisy and Anabell to come closer Daisy was terrified she tried to run away but she couldn't because her legs wouldn't work for her. she tried to scream but it was like Daisy was petrified. She decided that the only way to escape being frozen was to go forward. She took one step after another and each step felt like a step closer to an unsteady bridge.

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Daisy wasn't keeping track of the time, it seemed like an hour. After only about 5 minutes the figure broke into a run. They soon came to the entrance of the tunnel,  Daisy was relieved to finally breathe fresh air. 

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 Once they got over the fresh air they realised their Surroundings, it was beautiful. They saw beautiful fruit trees scattered around in a big meadow on the outskirts of the meadow was a big forest. Wild Horses were eating apples and playing with each other. Then they saw a crystal clear pond with a waterfall near the forest where the wild horses were drinking water. “ Wow, “ said daisy.  “Hi, what's your name ,”Anabell said to the figure “Khan.” said the figure “ What's yours?” “I’m Daisy and this is Anabell,” said Daisy.  “We'd better get going,” said khan. “Why?” asked Anabell. But khan didn't answer until they were in the safety of the forest. “ Now can you tell us what you were going to say?” asked daisy.   Khan explained that he and his tribe were in danger from evil spirits with black magic. “Oh WOW look at the time Anabell.” Daisy said. “We should get going,” said  Aanabel. 

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Anabel and Daisy were standing at the entrance looking at Khan. But Anabell wanted him to come with them too. But Kyan said “no.”  Then the Principle came to check on Anabel and Daisy. “ Hi Girls. It's lunch time now so you are allowed out of detention. ``said the principal. ``Ok.” Said Anabel. Anabel and Daisy walked out of the Principles office and into the playground where they saw a new girl being bullied by the cool guys and one of them was Daisy's friend,  and his name was karl. “ hey karl, IN COMING!!” Then Daisy punched Karl in the face. “ Hey, boys, do you want a punch in the face as well?” Said Daisy . “ N N NOO?'' said the boys. Then they ran away, But the teacher was watching!! “ GIRLS. COME HERE!!!!” The Principle yelled. “ We're busted.” Said Anabell. 

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They were in detention Again. “ Thanks for helping me,” said the new girl. “My name is Ashley by the way.” “ Hi.” Said  Daisy and Anabell at the same time. “ My name is Anabel and this is Daisy.” “ Um, hi.” said ashley. “ Hey, do you want to know a secret?” said daisy. “ YEAH.” shouted ashley. “ well.” said daisy. “There is a hidden city at the end of a tunnel but you can't tell anyone! Promise?” “ Promise. '' Said Ashley. Then Daisy pressed a button under the table. Then before you could say what are you doing?This is when Daisy shows Ashley the hidden city's.a trap door appeared . “What the heck. That was so creepy and weird at the same time,.” said Ashley.